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Soppy about you (yet another poem I wrote) - There's something about Mary...

Jun. 3rd, 2011 09:49 pm Soppy about you (yet another poem I wrote)

Another 'poetic' offering, though rather frivolous, simplistic, etc....



 - Soppy about you -

Soppy about you -
Love to be out with you
holding your hand
and dancing through life.

Dreamy about you -
Love to go sleep with you
hearing you breathe
and knowing you're close.

Grinning about you -
Love to wake up with you
seeing you smile
and smiling right back.

Whistful about you -
Love to be kissed by you
tasting your lips
and floating away.

Joyful about you -
Love to explore with you
smelling the flowers
and sharing the world.

Crazy about you -
Love to run wild with you
madly in love
and singing our songs.

Happy about you -
Love to discuss with you
learning your views
and giving my own.

Misty about you -
Love to look up with you
feeling your hugs
and gazing at stars.

Something about you -
Love to link minds with you
sensing your thoughts
and being as one.

Soppy about you -
Love to live life with you
gladly in love
and dancing through life.

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Comments:

From:doctorstewie
Date:June 3rd, 2011 10:05 pm (UTC)
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This is gorgeous, and I think your best so far. It's got a lovely simple structure that carries its intent well. It's tender and like all your poetry its honest. Xx
From:jl_legend
Date:June 7th, 2011 09:55 pm (UTC)
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It is very soppy, but in a beautiful classy way. It's a nice simple structure, very evocative and very clear - it tells the world what I presume you wanted to tell the world, it's an announcement, a statement of intent.

I hope you keep up with the poetry, I am enjoying them :)