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Jun. 1st, 2011 12:19 pm Always - (inspired by Tim Crumpton)

I am feeling braver about sharing my poetry, after some nice feedback recently.  

 
I still think what I write is very mediocre, but I'll try not to let that put me off posting the odd thing on-line.  The poem below was written a while ago about my fabby fiancé, Tim Crumpton (timpootle ), but I only finished it yesterday
 
He hasn't seen it yet, as he is still asleep after a night shift.  Do you think he'll like it? ;-)

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 - Always - 


You are my rock,
my resting place,
in the stormy sea of life.
Always there,
keeping me safe,
surrounding my soul with strength.

Your constant love,
so straight and true,
in our ever-changing world.
Always there,
lifting me up,
a tide that carries me home.

I'm high on love,
surfing the waves,
as we ebb and flow through life.
Always there,
your tranquil sea,
surrounding my heart with peace.

And you embrace
my tidal flow,
as I strive to change the world.
Always there,
guiding me on,
but never holding me back.

With you I can
be truly be me,
and free to love who I choose.
Always there,
I love you so,
and I always, always will.

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From:the_hatstand
Date:June 2nd, 2011 10:55 am (UTC)
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I think he'd be hugely flattered. I know I would be. :-)